Pin-Up Anarchy

So this one didn't come out the way I wanted it to, it came out allot different. Thank Kurt for the nice Satanic Bible, covering my girlie parts, touch. I love my seamed stockings, really trying to get a bit more into pin-up, please Critique this, other than the obvious (lighting, blown out, etc, etc). Pose, expression, etc. critique would be wonderful.

Edit: I have cleaned and uploaded a new version of this, I was unhappy with the first.

Model: Myself
Photography: ~RevanWindFang